1) YouTube Upload: https://youtu.be/0Tbqqs9sMII
2) A
reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
The feedback I received from my original pitch was very complimentary.
Feedback included that I did a good job in making my pitch personal by adding
real life experiences. It was also noted that I broke the down necessary
elements of the pitch succinctly. While I would not have been objectionable to
more criticism as I was aware my pitch did need some work, I did not receive
any. This was somewhat surprising. There was also no feedback that I thought
was silly or unfounded.
3) What
did you change, based on the feedback?
In my second pitch, I chose to better use my voice pitch. I
noticed in the original clip my voice did not appear to be my regular tone.
Additionally, I attempted better use of eye contact and tried to incorporate nonverbal
cues. Overall, outside of sounding some what monotone in one or two areas of
the pitch I thought it to be good.
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