22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

1) YouTube Upload: https://youtu.be/88t3scxHuhw

2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. 

As noted in my previous post, the feedback I received from my original pitch was very complimentary. Feedback included that I did a good job in making my pitch personal by adding real life experiences. It was also noted that I broke the down necessary elements of the pitch succinctly. With minimal feedback outside of the one entry, I decided to look within for any changes that could benefit me.

3) What did you change, based on the feedback?

In my third pitch, as I did in my second, I attempted to better utilize my voice pitch. I tend to go up an octave when performing a presentation. I also worked harder on delivery/ timing, as well as maintaining of eye contact. Since the time of my most recent two pitches I have also cut off my hair and beard. This was as a result of my required Covid-19 travelling. I believe I looked more convincing with hair!